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Old 06-02-2008, 11:19 PM   #1
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I am pratheesh,after a long time i am posting a work here,This yatch was modelled in maya for a personel project,till today i was trying to make it out as an image,anyway i did one image but i want to make it a good one after haring comment from you guys,so plsss leave what do you think and what shuld do to improve it.Hope you lek the images.Thanks
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Old 10-02-2008, 04:06 PM   #2
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where are you guyss
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Old 10-02-2008, 05:07 PM   #3
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its a very nice model no doubt...u can work on the rendering part specially the water is not looking in tune with the ship
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Old 10-02-2008, 08:37 PM   #4
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thanks aspan for your comment

i will really work on water,may be in photoshop,becoz stimulation in real flow is too heavy for my system
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Old 14-02-2008, 05:38 PM   #5
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nice render
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Old 14-02-2008, 08:58 PM   #6
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thanks mannn

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Old 23-03-2008, 02:18 PM   #7
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nice dudeeeeeeee
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Old 24-03-2008, 09:08 AM   #8
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Looking very very nice .... especially the rendering. As Aspan noted, might need to actually work on the water (material a bit??) and moreover some splash at the edges might do the trick.
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Old 29-03-2008, 03:21 PM   #9
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hii
yatch model is lookin good, i guess need to work on water, its not lookin like d color n main thing it dsnt look like dat water n yatch is frm d same pic...

good wrk tho, al d best
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Old 24-06-2008, 04:23 PM   #10
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nice work buddy!
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Old 24-06-2008, 11:45 PM   #11
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amazing model
your modeling is very good
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Old 24-06-2008, 11:50 PM   #12
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The yatch modelling is very good
but can't say that abut the water. The ripples seems to be quite big as compared to size of the yatch. This makes the yatch look like a toy. the same i can say about the reflections that are falling on the yatch
secondly the yatch does not seem to submerged partly in the water. it seems to me like its somewhat hoverring...........may be its just me
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