advice

anil_arts · 30-12-2007, 05:51 PM

hi guys,
i made a scene,please give your advice and opinions to me.

mht_jigar · 31-12-2007, 11:07 AM

Its too good.

iluvblender · 31-12-2007, 11:34 AM

Hello Anil.

Rendering looks very good. The composition could be improved if the foreground trees could be taller. Right now they are too short to fit in the scene.

Keep up the good work.

dropdeadfriend · 02-01-2008, 08:57 AM

hi anil
thats a good piece of work.
need improvement with the grass,trees,water....
the render looks very diffused.. work more on lights n shadows.

sank0683 · 03-01-2008, 03:06 PM

hi anil,

u work is really nice. my advice is do an occlusion pass, shadow pass, by using/adding sky light and render it in light tracer so u will get soft shadows, and composite in the scene i think it will make lot of difference. good work anil really good work.

anil_arts · 21-01-2008, 05:05 PM

thanks, mht_jigar for compliments
thanks, iluvblender,dropdeadfriend and sank for their precious suggestions.i really would work on those areas which you guys have specified.

i agree with iluvblender and dropdeadfriend that some work should be done on trees water and grass.i have rendered it in v-ray,so i would work on its light also as sank expressed.whenever i got time, i would work on those areas.

i am posting its evening view now, please give your views.

shijuS · 21-01-2008, 08:56 PM

HI
your work is good
although i would suggest that you add a occlussion pass. I cannot see the ground and building interaction.
adding it would greatly enhance the shadows