hi tantrics, I know its time for the final submission, so i m finally submitting my story
...(gosh!! why didn't i see this before?)
Anyways, Late - but not last(last for now!!), here is my story...
TITLE: Bollywood Heaven (subject to change without prior notice
Our hero is living in a small town. He wants to be a bollywood superstar. And one day he decides to try his talent at bollywood(and he really thinks that he got the talent!!!). And the story starts from there....
Our hero is taking permission from his late mother looking at his photo in filmy style. Mother in photo is a typical bollywood mother tries to stop him in bollywood style but fails..after the hero leaves, she talks to herself confidently:"woh aayega, Woh zarur aayega."(dialg. from karan arjun).
Our hero one way gets banged by a car on the way and darkness surrounds his eyes.When he opens his eyes, he find himself in heaven and old hindi song is being played in the background. He gets up and starts walking. On his way he looks a couple in grayscale on a grey tree swinging their legs in air (main ban ka panchi...), and some more voices of bollywood in backgroung(like mogambo..etc.)as he walks.very soon he looks in front and gets very excited. In background the very sweet sound says: " woh aagaya, dekho woh aagaya(..from the song piya tu abto...) He closes his eyes in plesure feeling that finally he got what he was looking for..
But as he closes his eyes he listen a sound of an old woman in the darkness behind his closed eyes:"Woh aayega, zurrur aayega." Suddenly he opens hi eyes being so perplexed and uncomfertable. And find himself with bandage on the wound on his forehead in front of his mother's photo. His mother in photo is giving smile to him.
what do u say frinds?....the story is going to be edited parallely to fit in 40 sec. slot so i might need to take out some non-storytelling scenes. Critics Plz.
PS. any suggestion for the better title?