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01-04-2006, 02:45 AM
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hey guys this is my first attempt at a finished and planned animation that i made for racoh
http://www.yourfilelink.com/get.php?fid=63124 waiting fo ur reps |
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04-04-2006, 03:40 AM
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07-04-2006, 12:09 PM
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i really don't know why the 'download file' button on yourfilelink doesn't work for me. it just ends up opening another exact same page....its like a never ending process..... sorry mandeep can't see ur file (or anyone's onyourfilelink) |
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09-04-2006, 01:04 AM
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Humm....do you still have to complete the animation...??? Is this jus the blocking phase??? Alrite here's my bit... It would look better if u didnt have any cuts and kept all the action in he same shot... Another thing is...the hands...now i dunno if u have to complete it maybe you have kept it 4 the end...basically work on the palms and fingers...that expresses a lot... There's 2 much of spine movement on the lady...and absolutely none on the guy....Ony his head seems to be moving....Give him some upper torso & arms motion....And tone down the sine movement on the lady Yup that's pretty much it right now..I d like to c the whole finished animation..where I can guide u more...all the best! |
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10-04-2006, 01:15 AM
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hey thankx moush thanks for your comments i really apreciate
that....the animation is still in the blocking phase i need to do alot of stuff ............... nd i will surely follow ur points on that ............................. will update it soon. thanks again cheers Mandeep |
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10-04-2006, 10:52 AM
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Mr. Keyframe
Join Date: Feb 2006
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When I first saw your animation, I thought that its not in the blocked mode. And I can see that its in the spline mode (it looks like spline to me!). Well, nice 1st attempt Mandeep. But you need to devote some more time on your animation. Alright, first of all, DO NOT concentrate much on the acting stuff, and concentrate more on the mechanical stuff first. Because if you don't master the mechanics, you won't be able to do much of the acting stuff. Are you getting my point? So, right now, concentrate on your arcs, breakdowns, and readjust your inbetweens to improve the timing of the animation. Do some basic walk and run cycles. Read Animator's Survival Kit to refine your work. Ok, hope that helps. -Amrit Derhgawen Quote:
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15-04-2006, 04:03 AM
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hey thnx amrit for ur comments i just did this without any
pro. reading material but now i hav odered the book and i m waiting for its arriva, will update soon with currections thanks cheers Mandeep |
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16-04-2006, 01:22 AM
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Mr. Keyframe
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Good spirit Mandeep. Keep going! Good luck! Quote:
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