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Old 20-01-2012, 10:28 PM   #1
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its modelling and shading is done in 3ds Max and textured in photoshop.
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Old 21-01-2012, 12:17 PM   #2
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Nice attempt. Looking good. But the camera angle is not best. As in the movie the "Rat" was there, so the scene looked complete with him. As the motto was the shot to show a wide angle shot to show the "Rat" in the Kitchen shelf environment.

As far as your scene, just play with the camera angle until your scene look complete.

Carry on the effort and good work.
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Old 21-01-2012, 03:25 PM   #3
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apart from camera angle you need to work a lot on materials and their properties try to get real life reference images and then mimic those features in maya like glass bottles ceramic utensils etc

then similarly study lighting

waiting for your updated work
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Old 21-01-2012, 10:30 PM   #4
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thanx for your suggestions i wil definitely work upon them
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Old 21-01-2012, 10:32 PM   #5
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thanx...i will try to improve my cinematography
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Old 22-01-2012, 10:48 PM   #6
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Old 23-01-2012, 01:36 PM   #7
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Nice wrk gud texturing
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Old 25-01-2012, 01:08 PM   #8
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thanx to all
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Old 27-01-2012, 10:51 AM   #9
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gud one.....
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