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Old 13-01-2011, 01:15 AM   #1
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hii guyz....dis is my new wrkk in wip prosses,
i want 2 make him lil bit exigrated like comicks nd sme time gaming cherecter....l m gonaa make leather paint 4 him so hve didnt wrk on legs.....
plz give sme Critcs n suggations........
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Old 13-01-2011, 03:57 PM   #2
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Hi Gurjeet, Your work is good, but if you want to improve it more, then u need to work on Anatomy, there are lots of issues in proportions, specially leg part and shoulder. Abs detailing is not perfect. try to take some real ref.

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Old 13-01-2011, 06:52 PM   #3
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locky : thanx..........i will c there....bt while making dis charecter i was thinking about bit exigerted physiq like comics cherecters...Wolwarin,Thor or Doga...bt now i will rework on proprtion.......let c........
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Old 15-01-2011, 01:00 AM   #4
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Hi Gurjeet

Fantastic work. You got the skills. I have to agree with locky10 about the proportions. Although you could get away with them if your character is stylized or more cartoony. You are right about comic characters that some of them are exigerted but keep in mind not to get too carried away with it. Some real references always helps. Cant wait to see more of your updates.
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Old 15-01-2011, 11:30 AM   #5
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Hi.,.gurjeet,,.nice but i also agree with locky10,.,so try to understand anatomy.,.and keep up.,.,vinso(vinay)
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Old 15-01-2011, 12:22 PM   #6
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Well i dnt hav mch knowledge of Modelling bt its luking great yaar nyc model
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Old 18-01-2011, 09:04 PM   #7
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hey.. Dude.. Nice Work...
waiting for FInal Model with Texture..
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Old 18-01-2011, 11:36 PM   #8
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gr8 work bro.,.,.as always.,

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looks good for me.waiting to c how this character turns out finally.
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Old 25-01-2011, 04:41 PM   #10
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amazing work man ...!!!!


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Old 28-02-2011, 07:17 PM   #11
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Old 28-02-2011, 09:21 PM   #12
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Fantastic work my friend .
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Old 02-03-2011, 10:32 AM   #13
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Really great work..................
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Old 05-03-2011, 02:52 PM   #14
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coooooool witing for final composting....
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Old 09-03-2011, 01:29 PM   #15
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nice work gurjeet bhai and texturing is also good
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Old 09-04-2011, 01:49 PM   #16
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Cool stuff man.. sory for replying late

I think the abs are too huge compared to the body.. something like 20 to 25% smaller will work. The strap going around the chest could have some more detail.. like maybe some more pouches.. more grenades.. accessories it more to make it look more interesting.. something like a knife, a transmittor etc. The device on his back is not working with the concept.. some thing more interesting will do.. but what we see right now doesnt really works well and feels flat .

Overall nice proportions, nice face.. Keep it going and make him a bad ass
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Old 14-07-2011, 12:19 PM   #17
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gurjeeeeeeeet paji.....burrraaa
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