animation demoreel

wadjechetan · 02-05-2010, 09:26 AM

heyyyy all...........i ahve upgraded my character animation show reel..........
plz gimmee some suggestions on that..........happy animating

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwFOF_ujAug

Set_key · 02-05-2010, 10:37 AM

nice work dude few suggestions from my side firstly take care of your staging in the first dialog scene you don't have to show the whole body you could have done that with just an upper body shot couz the lower part isn't actually doing anything.I can see you are good with walks and run cycles in acting shorts try to add more follow through try to settle into a pose try to give some ease in.And don't give actions just like that make them mean something in ur feminine walk the left hand is moving unnaturally if elbow isn't moving that much how can the hand generate so much power any ways keep animating ..................keep learning cheers

googboog · 08-05-2010, 04:12 PM

the first roll and tumble and the dog animation are the best, it looks just like cameron fieldings
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9EumV--fdk8 look at his dog walk!!

agree with the above poster about the full body shot lip sync, it looks a bit awkward, you could zoom in to a close up of his upper body

also the woman's walk, her head is bobbing too much, you can see her eyes rolling around inside her head, try and stabilize her head a little bit.

wadjechetan · 08-05-2010, 05:34 PM

thnk u very much guyssss for these suggestions.........i will surelly make correction in the suggested parts......happy animating.........

self-taught · 09-05-2010, 01:47 AM

why u waste too much time in showing ur NAME?Name is important or ur reel??
u missed many thing in football kick...pls do correct
please look at the girls walk again...
what about the Ear of tht dog? no moment is there?

packegman lifting weight-here why that baar is toooo long? u need to scale it..u check it again,how it looks?

Take all critics positively and upload it again...

Happy Animating

-Taaruni