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08-04-2010, 11:13 AM
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Gurjeet Singh
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GJ's sketch book
hi i m Gurjeet Singh...posting ma new Wrkks plz giv sme ur opinions nd critics.
i did sme scatches befor starting dis bt cant post (  scaner)abot CONCEP: (4 my better conviniens telling in hindi  ) MY cherecter name is KHOTTA.dis means DUFFER in punjabi languege. 1 rahis dampatti Andmaan Nikobaar se honymoon mana kr apne prsnol charted vimaan se vaapas aa rahe the. ki achanak tufaan aa jane se unka vimaan ghane janglo ke bich crash ho jata hai or unki MOAT ho jati hai. achha hua jo wo prakritik moat se mar gae nahi to us ghane jungle me unhe DARDnaak moat dene ke liye koi or b tha....... wo....wo....AADAMKHOR 'KHOTTA'...now u all can undrstand how much bad effect from RAZ COMICS in ma Mind       
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08-04-2010, 11:39 AM
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Fresher
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amazing work
Amazing work man....
liked the story... KHOTTA...he..he..he... everything is superb 
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08-04-2010, 12:00 PM
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Gurjeet Singh
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sme more images
hope u guys ill like dis
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08-04-2010, 01:00 PM
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nice work gurjit.
I really like the sculpting part. Lizard also nice sculpt. Texturing also looks nice . But work on the anatomy of this character. Specially on his upper leg & his Butt. You did nice job on face but give more hand on the other parts of the this character. Show me the close shot of lizard with texture.Best of luck Gurjit. keep going like this. And finally work on the composition also. Its not matching with background. Phatte chuck dayo. 
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08-04-2010, 01:04 PM
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Nice Work Bro.........
Khotta is ur Imagination or u had took any Reference ?
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08-04-2010, 01:22 PM
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Gurjeet Singh
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THANX manik for ur gud Suggetions....i will post dat lizards render
.......thanx maxthebest685....dis is my own cretion bro....nd all did wid my imegin. widout any reff aspect of my hand drawn Skatchs...i used rff for lizard...bt dis is not detaild.
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08-04-2010, 01:31 PM
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Awesome Imagination U Have. Dude...
Keep it Up..... All the best... But Work on Composition...
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08-04-2010, 02:53 PM
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that's pretty cool...yeah need some work but its a good going!
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08-04-2010, 03:07 PM
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nice sculpting Gurjeet ; you could maybe enhance the pose and work more on transition between the various muscle groups
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08-04-2010, 03:30 PM
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Gurjeet Singh
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Thanx a lot jaxcage
Thanx for Reply Sriram sir nd 4 gr8 suggetions...
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08-04-2010, 08:50 PM
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nice work dude keep it up many time i told u that i agree with sriram sir ok keep it up
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08-04-2010, 09:33 PM
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Gurjeet Singh
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Thanx pankaj........
thanx 4 ur right suggetions......hmmmmm..i will.........
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08-04-2010, 09:57 PM
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xcellent modelling dear... bt work on final composition...
keep it up.... |
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09-04-2010, 10:03 AM
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Gurjeet Singh
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Thanx imagine_tantra.....
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10-04-2010, 03:25 AM
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nice work...
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10-04-2010, 10:40 PM
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nice work singh sab.,hehe.,
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10-04-2010, 10:43 PM
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Very naughty khotta
Punjabi naa changa lagda payaa hai nice good selection of name And about the character, its simply awesome Good job Keep it up!!! |
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11-04-2010, 12:02 AM
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that's what we call "creative". good man. have patience. u have a long way to go. All the best TIGER. excellent piece of work. BEST WISHES.
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11-04-2010, 01:32 AM
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First of all..Good work mate!Now that you have accomplished this much with your imagination,take some references and work on the muscle flow.sometimes we unnecessarily put in some extra muscles which aren't required.it happened with me also.Facial expressions are ok,but posing is the area of concern.And when you composite it with your background,one very important thing..always think of the light source.use a bg which matches your model's shade and light.You can look at the work of great 3d artists over the net...you will understand what I mean to say.Your skill and hardwork shows in this artwork,but one always can improve..so incorporate those things in your future artworks.best of luck mate!
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