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Old 12-03-2010, 01:40 AM   #1
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Sorry Guys....i m busy wid some other project so i hv no much time do fine tune dis.......
or i told ya this is my PRACTICE ANIMATION.....


BUT very soon i upload some of my own concept wid cute, n sweet ANIMATION.....




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Old 12-03-2010, 01:34 PM   #2
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Nice render and backgrounds looking cute
Keep it up!
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Old 12-03-2010, 06:16 PM   #3
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Thnx PARI....
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Old 13-03-2010, 09:41 AM   #4
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good rendering & bg ....need more fine tuning...keep going
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Old 13-03-2010, 12:40 PM   #5
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hi,
good attempt...

I think the big ball look little bit stiff. Big ball drifting at the same place which is look non realistic animation.

work more on anticipation poses and hold poses...it will automatically improve you animation and look natural.

as a animator, we dont have to render the whole scene out but need more attentions in animation stuff, but you did a great job in rendering too. it look really great.

you can do it better...
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Old 13-03-2010, 08:13 PM   #6
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hi,
good attempt...

I think the big ball look little bit stiff. Big ball drifting at the same place which is look non realistic animation.

work more on anticipation poses and hold poses...it will automatically improve you animation and look natural.

as a animator, we dont have to render the whole scene out but need more attentions in animation stuff, but you did a great job in rendering too. it look really great.

you can do it better...



THaNX BHAVESH.....
I m newly start animation in MAYA or Max i m not doing smthing big only walk cycle or run cycle in done in max......so now m doing animation in Maya.....or i need more concentration, more observation n more more leran abt antimation...so i need time to learn all these things....
i wil do smthing better then this...with sm new n my own concept....

thnx dear...for replying my this thread
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Old 13-03-2010, 08:24 PM   #7
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nice job.............
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Old 13-03-2010, 11:35 PM   #8
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Old 15-03-2010, 12:07 AM   #9
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Really good buddy Keep it up..........
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Old 18-03-2010, 07:18 PM   #10
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Old 27-03-2010, 11:09 PM   #12
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Gr8...keep it up...
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Old 31-03-2010, 01:19 PM   #13
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both balls are very stiff. you should try harder to fill life in your Animation but not in your scene. first of all try to understand about how to apply 12 principle of animation to this. bcos first of all it lacks in its timing and spacing.
and i'll recommend you to see more precisely the original animation of this done by Mr. Cameron Miasaki (Pixar Animator).
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Old 01-04-2010, 10:16 AM   #14
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excellent work.. appreciate your idea.... keep it up....


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Old 01-04-2010, 04:38 PM   #15
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both balls are very stiff. you should try harder to fill life in your Animation but not in your scene. first of all try to understand about how to apply 12 principle of animation to this. bcos first of all it lacks in its timing and spacing.
and i'll recommend you to see more precisely the original animation of this done by Mr. Cameron Miasaki (Pixar Animator).
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Thnx Bharat....m trying.......hope i will learn smthing...i wil do smthing....
again thaku
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Old 01-04-2010, 04:41 PM   #16
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Thnx Rajesh....for Apprication....
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Old 10-05-2010, 08:54 PM   #17
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Old 13-05-2010, 09:03 PM   #18
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nice work ..

just check ur graph .. when the big ball comes down, i think the graph is smooth.
change it to linear, to have a better impact .
also, just re-check ur arcs, frame by frame ....
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Old 13-05-2010, 09:19 PM   #19
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not bad dude! i do agree that animation needs quite a bit of work (the weight is not very convincing), but at the same time, i'd also like u to come up with original ideas. this is clearly inspired from the cameron miyasaki clip. not that there's anything wrong with doing that, PROVIDED u're doing that only from the perspective of learning. i used to do that too... but in time u need to break away and come up with ur own stuff.

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Old 14-05-2010, 08:20 PM   #20
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Hi Little_Animator

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