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Old 27-01-2010, 05:31 PM   #61
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Dude... think the toyota supra's tails will fit perfectly.... check them out....
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Old 27-01-2010, 11:09 PM   #62
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tell how is this concpt...
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Old 27-01-2010, 11:37 PM   #63
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Wow.....suparbbb....boss.keep it up....
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Old 28-01-2010, 11:56 AM   #64
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Nice concept man.
could you try to make it drift...will look supercool then...
why'd you remove the headlights? they were looking good...
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Old 28-01-2010, 03:03 PM   #65
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hi...zombiez.............l did nt remove the hdlit... but i didn t put lit there thts y it look9 like dat............... i ll do wht ever u suggest me.... and thnks 4 urs refrnce...............tc man
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Old 28-01-2010, 10:09 PM   #66
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hi...zombiez i didnt understnd how to make it drift?... r talk9 about a car which is driffting on this rood?
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Old 30-01-2010, 01:53 AM   #67
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allmost finished update.................need to do rendr with camm animation... tell me how is bg and how is it looking as my final shot in day time? ...afte dis ll do night scene... m wait9 for lots of c/c...
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Old 30-01-2010, 02:29 AM   #68
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ok ..good bro....,nicely attem ....
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Old 30-01-2010, 03:56 AM   #69
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little bit update with another bg
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Old 30-01-2010, 08:30 AM   #70
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second bg is looking good better than first one
day time is perfect ,just trry some another bg near garage or park place or near bldgs that will give u good output
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Yeah....i fully agree with u...Paras....,Nice...work....& mood..
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Old 30-01-2010, 10:54 AM   #72
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Wow very very well done
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Dude...good job with the render...
Noticed some stuff so am posting comments and also a sample drift explanation.
there's a short note..additionally do watch fast and furious 3 tokyo drift for a better idea.
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thnks pari, paras and sandip... ll keep in mind urs suggestions...
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dear nice effort you are doing..here are few changes (According to your last update image) you should do according to me...

1. you need to work out for reflection
2. work out for all edge fillet (round corners) specially for head lights and radiator. (make it less round) as it should not be this much round it should less instead
3.if you are using maya and rendering with mental ray, thn use car paint and set proper value if you have all ready use that. specially for reflection and fake value too.
4. if you are using maya software than use clear coat utility in reflection node it will gives you nice falloff of reflection (keep in mind clear coat doesnt work with mental ray)
5. make some interior (highly recommended) and thn make your glass (windshield) as real life black instead. it will gives you more realistic look.
6.inner part of headlight (reflection mirror element) shader doesnt looks real it should be more reflected chronic thn whatever now.
7. if you check it out and will observe in depth of car look. you will find no specularity or very very less specularity, so you should remove or less your car shader specularity.
8.make your wheel part a bit concave or convex where you have problem with flat reflection. it will give you bit depth whatever flat instead.

Note: If possible change entire colors for the car now its too dark both color so its very hard to understand car design and also its looking fake so use as per real car color may be it will gives you some nice feel..but of course its depend on you..

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increase the wheel size ..btw nice model!
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ok........... maxmetallica.......ll do
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how is it looking from back side ?
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after level correction in photoshop...
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Wowoo...broo.it's looking....fantastic...now..,but...the rear spoiler is not match with ur back finder(i mean in between joint section)...and the silencer...is looking big i think.....any way best of luck with ur next updates
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