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Old 26-10-2009, 10:56 AM   #1
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Hi everyone,
Here i have posted my new work in max, i want to be a lighting artist so give me comments to improve my lighting.....
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Day view with Some color correction

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Old 26-10-2009, 04:54 PM   #2
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hey overall very nice lighting
just ur exteriors look very flat
and ur last n 1st image certain areas are over exposed
in d 1st the painting
n d last the sofas side n floor

except these rest is a gr8 work
keep it up
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Old 27-10-2009, 10:21 AM   #3
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Hi nupur,
Thanks for ur comments soon i will correct that things
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Old 27-10-2009, 01:00 PM   #4
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hey alexaandz this is max works right but you didnt us told about the rendering engine is it vray if it so ican really help you a lot. with all the lighting stuff . about your images the 1st one looks good , second also looks great but watch out for the third one there's alot of buring on the floor near the window actually when the sun falls inside the house or may be on the floors make sure the floor texture must be slighting visible thats what we can do to avoid over exposures , in the scenes
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Hi there, for the first image is great but 2 other must improve. you better in night lighting then daylight. actually for the daylight the background view outside of the window, must be overbright. but on your scenes, its nothing happened there. for the background pic also not suitable to the angle of the cam, check for the horizon!!! does it suitable to the cam? no think...its better the background of the night scene. the horizon is suitable to the angle of cam.
for sun light the 2nd one is better then the 3rd one. it looks natural.
anyway, on the 3rd scene, where's the candelier and the downlights gone?

sorry for my corrections...but anyway wishing u can be improve better and better...cya...

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Old 27-10-2009, 06:10 PM   #6
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Hi mohdmajid
I used mentalray rendering and the last image was a try but i will correct that one, thanks a lot man and also tell me about v ray b'coz i didnt used it
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Old 27-10-2009, 06:15 PM   #7
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Hi tankq
Ur comments r always welcome
nice to see people like u
I will modify that one
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nice color and bounce..i like all of them
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Old 27-10-2009, 09:43 PM   #9
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Hi mahenkumar
Thanks man keep on commenting
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