Cg Canvas

_raviShankar_ · 27-05-2009, 07:26 PM

Hi all ....

I am having some free time now and am trying to develop my personal portfolio...
would be posting my WIPs here in this thread....
Comments and critiques are welcome....
The base mesh was made in Maya, detailed and textured in zBrush .....

Smooth_Criminal · 28-05-2009, 02:51 PM

Very very cool work man.. got a few suggestions.. the pectorals look kinda flat and they are going too top into the deltoids when there muscle should start from almost under the arm pits.. similarly u can give some more volume to the overall muscles in there like the abs, deltoids, some of the leg muscles etc. and also soften of the rib cage.. But overall I really like it

sanket_leo · 31-05-2009, 05:35 PM

yeah man ,,, the muscle luk little stiff to me in some areas.. nice poly paint though.. and i agree with Smooth_Criminal about the pecs n deltoids. try to give it some pose .. and may be some aggressive luk .. right now its luking as if he is pissed at something .. just advice...
keep it coming .

_raviShankar_ · 22-06-2009, 09:50 AM

Thanks for the replies ......

this is where i got till i felt enough is enough... felt saturated after working on him for some time now..
wanted to pose him ...but thats for later....
also wanted to do some hair/fur ...but my laptop is already crying with this beast loaded..ha ha
hope you guys like it...

Bunti parwani · 22-06-2009, 01:03 PM

great work......

_raviShankar_ · 23-06-2009, 06:46 PM

Thanks Bunty.....
here is another turntable ....

_raviShankar_ · 28-06-2009, 11:17 AM

This is another model i plan to add ........

ArtZealot · 29-06-2009, 02:40 AM

Hi all I am also making similar kind of model its a "Minotaur" Looks something like this except the face. I agree to the comments made by "Smooth_criminal" Nicely explained about the basic changes you should do but I can't see any of those changes in the next Updated Images whatever my Critics :

1) Deltoids looks odd to me, make it a little Big.
2) And the pectoral also been told earlier.
3)Overall Muscles definition can be done to make more Interesting, specially the back Muscles, doesn't essentially means change of Form.
4)Texturing is really nice But I think you can put more variations in it !!!!

Good Luck and nice going so far !!!

_raviShankar_ · 29-06-2009, 12:40 PM

Hi....
Thanks for the comments guys..
I couldnt do the corrections till now as i had got tired working on him...
i guess i was in a situation where i would sit for long hours on him for some days and get tired of it...so to get off it i was working on something else..
will be posting that also (soon)..
Did some work on the creature... beefed him up a bit..
tweaked the deltoid and pectorals as you guys said
hope it looks better ...

ArtZealot · 29-06-2009, 05:40 PM

Far better than before.Still I guess you know what else to to , But still . Arms and Thigh need more definition I guess But good progress !!!!

BOL

_raviShankar_ · 06-07-2009, 11:24 PM

will keep working on the creature...
meanwhile this had kept me busy for the last two days..
trying outdoor lighting

proartlov · 07-07-2009, 01:30 AM

Very nice work dude..... Good to see u guys putting so much efforts and coming up with real good quality artworks here at CG Tantra!!!