hi,
this seems ok if u r fresher, but still need lots of work to do.
check ur timing...act out with stop watch and judge your timing.
check ur hand gestures...which move totally unbelievable...
check them with ur acting out...
Weight...check more about where is your balance line...hip movements...weight shift...
all that correct by only if you are acting out this shot and observe this all things...
I m not demoralize u...just keep doing practice...you will defiantly improve...
Regards,
Bhavesh Suthar
Character Animator
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