New Animation Demo reel

[mmohithster]

Hiii...guys am a fresher....and this is my second reel,,....please comment on it .....i ll be adding one more work for the final showreel.....right now i want to know where i stand with these works.....so critics please...so tat i can improve my reel...



http://in.youtube.com/watch?v=LrDZB1_Lil4

Do watch it in higher quality in youtube...thanku.....

[manish acharya]

hi thsz nice but wat i think you could do better in horse run cycle, while its running the front left jst movi'n like a pendulam..

[andy_humtsoe]

nice demo.......some point to take care of.....when the character is pull the bow for the 2nd time the spline has no curves at all. the big ball....i dnt feel the weight....the horse can be more smooth. over all it wa good




NEVER STOP ANIMATING......

[gada paras]

nice demo reel

[mmohithster]

Thanks for the comments manish,gaga and Andy....i am working on improving these works.....

[mini.2]

nice showreel
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[manimator]

Hey there..!!

Nice work.....looks like u have the moves..!!! practice more is wat i can say...

Look back into the jump scene.....you sud work on the timing of the jump.....Tim Rig shud land with a "Thud"....or just like a ball comin down with momentum......to give the weight feeling.

Cool ideas man... Get going.....

Cheers.

[andy_maxman]

Hey Bro'

For a fresher, I can say that is some good promise and lots can be achieved provided you have a good mentor at hand....

To begin with, while I would love to give some animation feedback, will share my general view on it for now...

-keep a simple fade in/out for your title
-do not use too much textural details or any other thing which takes away from what you want to show essentially....

for instance, the first shot has too much texture details, so the viewer is caught up on seeing the visual rather than the perforance

even so, for all the water in the pool.....if your acting / action is good and believable, you will be able sell a shot even with minimal detail.

It would help to spend all that extra time finessing your animation.

Hope that makes sense.

CheerS!

[manimator]

there it goes.....comments from the expert himself..!!!

Andy bhai..... how are you doing.....??..are you still in California..??.. and ya... please update your blog....

[mmohithster]

Thanks Andy,manimator and tulika.....for the comments....

Andy ...i attended the Srijan held in bangalore...where u and Abhishek were present to give animation tips....it was gr8.....i ll do those changes and update as soon as possible......thanks again

[mmohithster]

http://boxstr.com/files/4459744_c9h8o/New%20Demo.mov

Hiii...guys....i have done some small changes to my works.....And also added a dialogue animation in to the demo.....do let me know how it is...also please tell me how to improve the dialogue animation......thank you all for the suggestions.....

[mmohithster]

Here is the youtube link

http://in.youtube.com/watch?v=BzaZHhIc4eg