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Old 03-03-2012, 08:48 PM   #1
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Default Mustang,my first car in 3d

My very first upload and also first thread.
Hope you guys will like it.

All stuff done in 3ds max 2011
please leave comments & suggestion..............
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Old 05-03-2012, 03:42 PM   #2
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nice...i lyk the texturing
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Old 05-04-2012, 11:54 AM   #3
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Old 12-08-2012, 12:04 PM   #4
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model has quiet a few inaccuracies, but good attempt in all.
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Thanks rapheal9...can u tell me the inaccuracies in this,it will help me.
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Old 19-08-2012, 12:34 PM   #6
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Thanks rapheal9...can u tell me the inaccuracies in this,it will help me a lot.
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Old 19-08-2012, 11:55 PM   #7
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Nice Work _ but i think your scatter Name is Spoiling The Whole Image
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Old 21-08-2012, 07:29 AM   #8
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I am modelling a Shellby gt 500 which is quite similar to this mustang.... i think u need to look at some reference for the fog lights under the headlights... They hav a thick rim around the inset for the fog lights maybe u could try adding it Rest of the model is looking quite spot on from what i can tell... maybe try to get rid of some hard edges that you are getting under the grills? on the bumper.... but looking good bro
As for the textures, the cars body seems a bit too reflective and looks more crome like, unless thats what you are going for i would suggest toning it down a bit.... I really like the mags on the wheels, they looking great!! I hope this critique helped and that m not too late
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Old 21-08-2012, 11:18 AM   #9
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Thanks friends........
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Old 26-08-2012, 10:04 PM   #10
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nice work ...
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