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Old 02-01-2008, 09:17 PM   #1
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hi frnz,
plz comment n gimmi critiques on the walk i ve made in maya.
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Old 05-01-2008, 05:43 PM   #2
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hey 4ucharu !!! can u show the walk a little long, so that will be more clearly visible to see the animation.
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Old 06-01-2008, 09:34 PM   #3
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lPGPy4GvAVc

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Old 06-01-2008, 10:47 PM   #4
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Old 06-01-2008, 11:03 PM   #5
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looking nice . . . just when he puts his leg down a little shack in his upper part is may be much . as I think, may be m wrong.
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Old 07-01-2008, 10:33 PM   #6
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hmm... just see the pelvice area.. thts not like wat it had to be. very basic mistakes..
secondly, match the curves of frst and last pose. they are causing jerks... hands, shoulders, body...all...

keep it up.
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Old 08-01-2008, 08:45 PM   #7
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ok....i'll improve it. thanks for checking it.
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Old 28-01-2008, 05:01 AM   #9
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hey there..
looks like he's hurt his ryt leg..coz therez still some jerk there..
dont know wats wrong..
oo yea n one more i like the follow through of the right toe..its better than the left leg..
mayb im wrong..m learning myself..
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Old 08-02-2008, 12:14 AM   #10
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i improved it a bit i guess
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hello charu ur walk is good but u need more effort in this walk ok take care by by
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