Nokia

gaurav.atrey · 03-08-2006, 12:03 PM

Hello all, before u start commenting or complementing on this Nokia Mobile model of mine I? will like to tell you that this is my first time I did something like this, the model is totally my and i took help of my friend Som in texturing thanx to him. I really like to have your views on it, any kind of suggestions are welcome please mark your views.

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vijay_7363 · 03-08-2006, 12:57 PM

i am not able to see any shadows on surface a very difused and saturated shadow will appear on the surface , work on lighting. model is good send some wireframes

Nivedita · 03-08-2006, 01:53 PM

Hi Gaurav,

Nice effort friend.

I liked the model.....but think the phone is in the air....not on the ground.

As Vijay said.....u should work on lighting......though cnt see the shadow...as a result the model is losing the depth in it.

why don't u try some different texture on ground??????

well, its all my opinion.

Good start...........keep it up.

veeroo18 · 03-08-2006, 02:30 PM

nice efforts .. as u said this is your first attempt .. its really sincere work..

i think model is perfect in this angle .. i have some suggestions to improvise your work .. try them ..

try soft lighting with one side or diffuse shadow..

some reflections are required ..

buttons look flat ,, i think they should be lil bit embosed more.. n look separate..

but it is a nice show

ajayashish · 03-08-2006, 02:32 PM

nice effort... .u will always improve remember this.... so best of luck and keep practicing

kets · 03-08-2006, 11:44 PM

hey good model...plz send sm more angles..like front one......

Smooth_Criminal · 04-08-2006, 12:18 AM

Hey Gaurav... I suggest u post in the Wires too and I think the textures were kinda rushed though

sanket_leo · 06-09-2006, 03:24 PM

nice attempts.. but very flat .... need more work on corners and near buttons... doesnt match with the real one .... need mre details

cool_water · 06-09-2006, 03:31 PM

good effort....

keep practising......

all d best

sinhead · 07-09-2006, 12:02 PM

Nice work buddy!! Just that.. the buttons can be imporved!!

Lenin..

Guru.3D · 08-09-2006, 04:06 AM

I think i have seen u on orkut dude.
dont u work in a studio ?????????...i may be wrong.........

Anyways... if this is ur first effort.... its a good try....
I think u whould inprove the design a bit more..give depth where the buttons are going in..........
on the side make the volume thing...
Ppl have said about lighting. so wont mention it..

Cheers

Guru.3D · 08-09-2006, 04:09 AM

Found ya...

FxLabs Studios Pvt.Ltd Hyderabad.. right ?

Mave_rick · 08-09-2006, 12:21 PM

hey theres spca for ten more numbers on that keyapad........use the reference u have more effectively...keep tryin'

Genesis · 11-09-2006, 01:19 AM

Hi nice effort u have made. really good stuff for first time and also
need to say that work hard for your next post and also work on textures
and lighting m i see no shadows,,simply put an omni light and in
theparameters turn on the shadows and play with the settings . good
luck..!

Atrey · 15-09-2006, 03:40 PM

hay thank you every one for your suggestions I must keep all those in mind. And Guru u r right i am working in FxLabs Studios and I am also on orkut as ?gaurav atrey? u can search me with that there is only one gaurav atrey on orkut.