OUr Short Film- NEXT in LINE

Rahul Raj · 01-04-2011, 04:07 PM

Watch the film-do comment,share & Like it

http://www.vimeo.com/21286366

unonymouz · 01-04-2011, 04:29 PM

Not to be rude, but I did not understand the film at all. I really loved the ambience, but the music and selection of shots made it feel like a ramsay flick.

Rahul Raj · 01-04-2011, 04:34 PM

we just try to tell a story.it's happens in railway station...
the man,who after wake-up just tensed about the children, but after few second he knows that the kids are very safe...

(it's a short film,which we make in the II-year)

imagemagic · 08-04-2011, 10:06 AM

A strenghtless story..

unonymouz · 09-04-2011, 03:33 AM

Come on, don't be rude. When you make a film, you can come back here and talk like that.

angels_arrows · 09-04-2011, 03:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rahul Raj

Watch the film-do comment,share & Like it

http://www.vimeo.com/21286366

Its missing a sense of story for a short film .. its more like a gag or a teaser. I like some parts of the editing which tries building a story but fails eventually. The Look and feel of the Bg's appeal to me also the character. If more work was done animating I think it could have been a better short film. Overall good try ..

imagemagic · 15-04-2011, 09:51 AM

Sorry..,but i cannot give a "FAKE" encouragement to a fresher..

riggveda · 22-04-2011, 09:47 AM

story is not appealing, few technical problems are there in look and feel but overall its a nice effort. be positive and make more movies perfection comes over a period of time be ready to be experiment more with your skillset and keep on updating your skills... all the best....

Rahul Raj · 10-10-2011, 04:02 PM

Many thanks guys.. the total out will not convey the exact storyline.. that's becoz of our working experience.. any way will clear it next project...
Many thnks once agin guys.. do commenting ..

prashant_pra · 07-03-2012, 04:09 AM

its not a complete package to put it in short. lacks soul.

also plz watch my short film. It has to its credit 3 national/international awards and various other wins/nominations.
http://y2u.be/V7fflhjW-vA
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