Old 01-04-2011, 04:07 PM   #1
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Old 01-04-2011, 04:29 PM   #2
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Not to be rude, but I did not understand the film at all. I really loved the ambience, but the music and selection of shots made it feel like a ramsay flick.
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Old 01-04-2011, 04:34 PM   #3
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we just try to tell a story.it's happens in railway station...
the man,who after wake-up just tensed about the children, but after few second he knows that the kids are very safe...
(it's a short film,which we make in the II-year)
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A strenghtless story..
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Old 09-04-2011, 03:33 AM   #5
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Come on, don't be rude. When you make a film, you can come back here and talk like that.
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Old 09-04-2011, 03:43 AM   #6
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Its missing a sense of story for a short film .. its more like a gag or a teaser. I like some parts of the editing which tries building a story but fails eventually. The Look and feel of the Bg's appeal to me also the character. If more work was done animating I think it could have been a better short film. Overall good try ..
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Old 15-04-2011, 09:51 AM   #7
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Sorry..,but i cannot give a "FAKE" encouragement to a fresher..
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Old 22-04-2011, 09:47 AM   #8
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story is not appealing, few technical problems are there in look and feel but overall its a nice effort. be positive and make more movies perfection comes over a period of time be ready to be experiment more with your skillset and keep on updating your skills... all the best....
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Old 10-10-2011, 04:02 PM   #9
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Many thanks guys.. the total out will not convey the exact storyline.. that's becoz of our working experience.. any way will clear it next project...
Many thnks once agin guys.. do commenting ..
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its not a complete package to put it in short. lacks soul.

also plz watch my short film. It has to its credit 3 national/international awards and various other wins/nominations.
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U can get in touch with me at mail@prashantgolani.com. Also do visit http://www.prashantgolani.com/ for more of my works.
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