we just try to tell a story.it's happens in railway station...
the man,who after wake-up just tensed about the children, but after few second he knows that the kids are very safe...
(it's a short film,which we make in the II-year)
Its missing a sense of story for a short film .. its more like a gag or a teaser. I like some parts of the editing which tries building a story but fails eventually. The Look and feel of the Bg's appeal to me also the character. If more work was done animating I think it could have been a better short film. Overall good try ..
" to infinity and beyond " - Buzz Lightyear
story is not appealing, few technical problems are there in look and feel but overall its a nice effort. be positive and make more movies perfection comes over a period of time be ready to be experiment more with your skillset and keep on updating your skills... all the best....
its not a complete package to put it in short. lacks soul.
also plz watch my short film. It has to its credit 3 national/international awards and various other wins/nominations. http://y2u.be/V7fflhjW-vA
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