The Cabin

cgdharmesh · 13-10-2010, 10:38 PM

i did this for CGTALK ,

i want this render to look better , so i need your comment , suggestions & critics , please please give me some time here and post replies

Suvarcha · 14-10-2010, 12:20 PM

awesome work ........ Chak de phatte.......

cgdharmesh · 14-10-2010, 12:27 PM

thanks Suvarcha

guys i need critics please , how to make this look photo-real ?

3d-san · 14-10-2010, 12:53 PM

Awesome Dude keep it up..

e_animated · 14-10-2010, 01:30 PM

I'm no pro, but since you've asked for critics i'll say that the grass looks too blurred and the surface of the green mountain is the only thing that looks unreal to me...maybe u could work on it...besides that, its really good!

cgdharmesh · 14-10-2010, 05:21 PM

Thanks e_animated , your suggestions are nice , and i am gonna work on them

cgdharmesh · 15-10-2010, 11:35 AM

here's the morning version also

waiting for replies

sumedha · 15-10-2010, 12:40 PM

morning version looks very nice.

3d-san · 15-10-2010, 05:45 PM

cool man..
Creat night version too..

cgdharmesh · 15-10-2010, 06:18 PM

Thanks sumedha & 3d-san

cgdharmesh · 15-10-2010, 10:29 PM

c'mon frnds , i need more reviews PLEASE

rahul_cgartist12345 · 18-10-2010, 12:59 AM

frankly speaking..... texturing is not good... that's the reason the scene is not looking real....

you are efforting more and more lighting...but if texturing is not based on lighting... so how could it look like real???

cgdharmesh · 18-10-2010, 02:36 PM

thanks rahul_cgartist12345 , I agree with you , maybe my texture is not good , hmm lets see , if i can improve it , thanks man

Nikhil Gupta · 18-10-2010, 05:18 PM

owesum dude....morning scene is grt....but in evening there is some exterior lightning problem ,,, as me from hill station know that the far looking mountain is so light and there is much light in the grass and roof of cabin....

see the tree....upper leaves are too dark as less light on them and as you go to low light gets increasing....

pmv789 · 19-10-2010, 10:38 PM

Good work, but the sky had become too plain, I mean no clouds & pink in color

rahul_cgartist12345 · 19-10-2010, 10:48 PM

@ cgdharmesh...
have you done any new changes....?

InTheShadows · 24-10-2010, 01:12 PM

dear dharmesh,

You are doing well.
You can improve your work by addind nessecary details in textures.
i also think the bark of the tree ain't looking right.
In the first shot, there would be more light on top areas of your scene.
In second shot, the sky is too dull.
You can also add a bit metallic shine in the wind mill part, if neede.

Please do work on it.
Regards
SIVAN