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Old 26-06-2010, 06:55 PM   #1
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Default texturing Work in progress, critics and suggestions needed

hey friends.

this is the first big thing m trying to texture.

its a low/ medium poly jeep to be textured as damaged, burned and scratched . As its a new big thing for texturing for me ... i really need some critics, suggestions n more ideas to finish the texturing of this vehicle.

i will be uploading the basic model the updated model, its unwraps, textures n references m going to use and the WIP aswell..

PLEASE COMMENT as to whatever the first thing comes to ur mind, how is it looking, n how it can look better.

Thanks in advance

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Old 26-06-2010, 07:02 PM   #2
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Default the initial model

i started up with basic model .. and it has no big details
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Old 26-06-2010, 07:06 PM   #3
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added some details....like showed some damage... n adding a machine gun.... and reduced the poly count to 18000
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Old 26-06-2010, 07:11 PM   #4
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Gun added to the scene.... seats chanced... tyres low poly....n more important ... Poly count reduced to 9051 .. well in control now
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Old 26-06-2010, 07:58 PM   #5
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was looking for some reference for kind of look m looking for ... wanna give it a look of a left over jeep of a war scene..
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Old 26-06-2010, 09:49 PM   #6
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Good job on the modeling. I would add the shocks on the inside of the front wheels since they would be visible. Looks like a nice project. Can't wait to see it finished.
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Old 26-06-2010, 10:54 PM   #7
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PEN1 - thanks for the comment... i was trying what u said .. moreover gave more distorted shape to the tyre... will cover more in texturing on this... how is it looking now plz suggest
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Old 27-06-2010, 02:17 AM   #8
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Hey ashimator, I'm guessing this is a U.S. army jeep, right? The model looks good and I know it's a W.I.P. so I don't wanna rip it apart, but there are some important modeling details that are missing, have not been added, or need adjusting. Check some references and you'll see. Just off the top a few things that stick out from the angle of the shot....

I feel ya should add the running board along the side that you would step on to get into the jeep.

The part where the bumper connects to the grill needs some work because it looks like it's just floating.

The head lights should be set back into the grill.

No offense man. Like I said before it's a nice model, but it would be so much better if ya added the little details before you start texturing.

Keep up the good work!
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thanks man... appritiate ur feedback.. I think i can do these things to give it a better look..

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Old 27-06-2010, 11:42 AM   #10
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here is the first unwrap.... starting up with the texturing on the body...
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Old 27-06-2010, 01:40 PM   #11
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follow this link it would help : http://features.cgsociety.org/story_...?story_id=4678
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thanks a ton for the link "aspan"..
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Old 27-06-2010, 06:43 PM   #13
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Maybe this is something for you too, the very basics but those are always
good to re-read to get it into long-term memory
http://www.leighvanderbyl.com/tutorials.html

and when I searched to find out where the above link where again I also
found a compilation of the above author that about photo-realistic texturing
that cover both the same and some more I think. I add it too
http://www.foundation3d.com/uploads/...-12-431262.pdf

Have fun :-)
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thanks a lot PEN1, aspan and erik for ur suggesions, feedback, links provided by u all.... thank a lottt

here m posting the WIP of the texturing i have started with ..

please respond as to how it has begun and going on n will do my best to finish it up with a good output asap with all ur feedbacks...
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Old 29-06-2010, 11:48 AM   #15
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begun with the front of the jeep ... given a base color and doing the burned effect over it...

As of now its just the Diffuse m working on... so there wont be any depth or specular right now...
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its the good start buddy ,you have also done good modeling with low poly, take references as much as you can ..... GOOD WORK
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thanks vishwas...

now here m with the latest updates of the work ...
Reached far from what i started.. Still lot of things to work on texturing n to add accessories at relevent places... looking for constructive feedbacks now to wrap this thing up..
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adding renders, 360 deg of the jeep to cover up the whole thing...
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gud.,.,keep wrking.,
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