Corridor

vivekdavinci · 12-08-2009, 11:52 PM

Hi Frens,
I am posting rendered images of one of my works,
I worked on this corridor mainly to include it in my lighting demo reel.
Work done entirely in Maya{modeling, shaders, lighting), rendered using Maya software renderer.
awaiting comments.

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manik · 13-08-2009, 08:25 AM

cool job. texture is looking nice. just check on the left wall, where u show some bricks. I think brick tiling will increase n secondly there should be light come out from the window, in second picture. I know this is night scene.But still it look so flat. I havent feel these are outer windows.

Diwanshu Gupta · 13-08-2009, 09:04 AM

well it,s too good lighting ....nice attemp.....
about the texture agreed with manik.........
my views because it,s your portfolio work...in the first scene u must add depth fog in the scene and decrease the light diffuseness from the window rest is too cool .........
about the second one agreed with manik the scene seems flat to me u can add a pale blue light comming from outside and merged with yellow that,s deffinatoly create the mood buddy ................
one more thing can u mantioned the render time........
keep rolling.........

vivekdavinci · 13-08-2009, 01:22 PM

Thanks Manik and Diwanshu.
the render times are 3 minutes on a pentium 4, 3.0 ghz, 1 gb ddr1 ram for a hd 720 image.
Thanks for the fed back,
actually i have lit the exterior wid pale blue lights, which shows when i turn of the interior lites,
but right now due to the strong interior lighting, i feel its not visible.
I will Recheck my lighting once again, Thanks again for the valuable feed back.