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[Deepam]

Hello everyone !!

My 3d work is currently not running, so I got some time for my second love that is Photoshoping.

This one is came to my mind due to inspiration from "Mountaineers - Before storm by Waheednasir". I know it is not a 30% of that level, just started working on painting technique in photoshop.

The concept was not pre decided, first I started creating a tree then things just started wandering in my mind.

Let's see how is it.

http://i242.photobucket.com/albums/ff249/deepampathak/tree.jpg

[subhashis_b]

hai nice piece of art.but i think the girl's pose,specially the hair could be made more interesting,going with the mood of the scene.

[waheednasir]

this is a very good attempt deepam...:), a few suggestions that i think might be helpful if u agree, here:
. every tree has its own anatormy, like humans, its always good to follow that, uve done it well, just little admustment needed, esp. with those branches. and see if u can get the dimension, roundness of the trunk.
. for a better composition, i would balance the middle and background by adding little something at the back, right side, or paint a part of the mountain (at left), or some other thing at the right side.
. i personaly wont have that branch behind the girl strictly parallel to her hair, have some randomness.
. lastly, her head seems a little too big.

ive only written all this cause i like what uve done and i like that uve made this without using colors, its always a challenge and very tricky, uve done it well. and im glad my work proved to be inpiring for someone, thank you...:).

all the best for your future work.

[Deepam]

Thanx subhashis, as I said earlier "The concept was not pre decided" so there may be some mistakes according to concept. I will work more on that in my next creation.

waheed - first of all I am very thankful to u for watching my artwork.
It's a pleasure to see u here. I am agree with all of ur points.

when I was painting the tree there was a doubt in mind that tree is going with the flow of not, coz I am pretty much aware about organic things, currently studying about human anatomy. But didn't search about others much.

the second and third tips are very useful for me, I got the points perfectly.

for head, I think the upper hairs placed too far then head or they are little big, that's why head is looking big, as I think so.

anyway, thanx for your valuable suggestions ! those are very helpful for my improvement.