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ashlee
15-11-2007, 11:35 AM
hi everyone ,
my character john and his other 3 colleages are reaserchers,who are researching on the climate changes happenging all
over the world but they are particulalry interested in alaska because the climate change there have been very drastic and they have also found out that there has been a continous emission of radio active radiations,which are continoustly increasing day by day which could be a great threat. so they planned a expedition of goin to alaska and found out what is really happening
their team inludes a tmeam of 4 people
1 tom
2 edward
3 billy
4 john
as they reach their they found out that there is a huge dngerous storm and wind(weather is not good) going in the sky but they thought that they would make it and will land on alaska but when they enter the storm something happend and plane got out of control and crashed into the icy land of alaska
after 7 hours our character john waked up and found that he is the sole survivor of the crash but he was injured on his leg and snow storm was going on
he took the broken part of plane as a shelter for the night and used his lighter and his colleages cloths to burn anwarmup and to keep
animals away from him. he also had a limited amount of food with him with which he can go for one month. he stayed in that shelter for one week and tried everything to try for help but he couldent make any contact with the people ,so finally he decide to make effort of going himself and finding help.

he took some ropes , a flare guns , a gun and somesharp objects, and some fire, and some food on a sledge , to save his life if encounterd by animal.
he walked at a distance of 3 kms one his journey he found many crashed plane but no survivor,he also found some letters an personal diaris belonging to the survivors who made some last attempts to survive , some also mention about the place that it is a place of evil. as he went further he got encounterd with a crocodile which came beneath the icy layer from the water ,which attaked him ferousiosly, he faught him try to afraid him with fire but he found out that there was something wrong with the crocodile .he was bigger than his normal size had red eyes like it is mutated monster and some steam coming out of it like it was hot, he shot 3 rounds which hit the crocodile but it took him lot more to put crocodile down.
finally he was able to kill the crocodile but he was not sure what the crocodile was doing on this icy island and he was curious to know that from where this crocodile came from because they are not found in icy region . in the process he was seriously injured and coudnt go more. and decided to take a shelter in a nearby cave and found out that the way of cave was leading to some under ground facility and
he decided to go in that.where he encounterd different type of creature and later in the game he found out that there were some underground govenment experiment going on in this area for past 7 years which went wrong and and some of the people of the involving the experiment died and some turned into some creatures . it also resulted in raio active radiation
which effected animals which were part of experiment and turned them in to dangerouse creatures. the experiment was all about mutating humans to turn the into a more better breed and use them as a weapon for military and defense , and in this process they created some monsters mutated with animal and human gene which our main character john will fight.
For his survival john made many weapons out of stones and made that place his home as he found out that this place is seperated from outer world and could not be contacted.
his main aim became his survival and to contact human world and to make them aware about discoverys and threath this place could be to the world.

Deepam
15-11-2007, 05:43 PM
hi ashlee !!!!

interesting concept and much closer to the given rules of the challenge.
One little thing to ask - Is that ok that the location is Alaska and u found crocodile there, in a icy region. . . . .just my thought, may be wrong.

but anyway , it will be nice to see the visuals soon. . . .Best wishes !!!:)

ashlee
15-11-2007, 11:02 PM
hi deepam thanks
as for the crocodile
i mentioned in my story that john(our main character) was amazed too to see that wat crocodile is doing in this island because reptiles are not at all found in icy region and they cannot survive there.but thats the point of the story because when john went to the facility he found out about the experiment ,then he came to know that these people have bought animals(reptiles mmamles ,tigers ,lions and many other) from all over the world
for experiment and mixing their gene and human gene.and when experiment went wrong all these animals were mutated .and these animals can survive in any habitat.thats why in the story i mentioned that steam was coming out of the crocodile because in cold he can keep himself warm.
you may have missed all this points,because of my bad english.

ashlee
15-11-2007, 11:15 PM
hi this is the early concept of john(after 2 yrs)after 2 years john has learned all the tactics of surviving and has become killer of those moster for his survival.
he has made his own weapons and developed his own style of killing the monsters.

Deepam
16-11-2007, 06:27 PM
hi Ashlee !!!!!

One little thing to ask - Is that ok that the location is Alaska and u found crocodile there

sorry for that . . . I just missed out that line, its not ur bad english :) ur english in good and easy to understand.

After seeing the chrtr I m quite satisfied, u r putting ur thoughts in visuals very well.

eagarly waiting to see the next ones . . .

FlameI
17-11-2007, 07:19 PM
Hi ashlee. nice concept but i just have a slight difference in opinion. juz my thought. firstly u said that tis guy is a weather researcher dosent has the looks of one. secondly john sounds like an american name but he doesnt looks like one. thirdly wearing so less amount of clothes (almost nothing down) in such cold if im not wrong its more than -25to-30degress in alaska.
But as i said tats just my thought. waitin for updates.

Animatar
18-11-2007, 06:58 AM
your drawings and concept looks great....but i agree with FlameI...you can rethink about this...lot's of luck...

ashlee
18-11-2007, 12:21 PM
hi thanks everyone for liking the concept.

this character concept is not the final one and it was just a idea of wat was going in my mind about the character.soon i am coming up with the final characters concept.
flame i think urs comments are very helpfull and i am keeping these point in mind, while making the final concepts.
thank you

milind.k
26-11-2007, 03:17 PM
why stress on story! I think main subject is given. which we have to picturised.
so I don't have problem whether he looks weather researcher or not.

Good drawing.

But I think 2 years are more important don't u?

ashlee
29-11-2007, 11:37 AM
hi everyone this is the final character concept for the game

ashlee
29-11-2007, 10:48 PM
i wanted to put this sketch because this will clear my story in the end