An Eminem Song (Animation)

[SHADY]

<P>hi this is the first time i am posting over here...lets see how many responces i am getting...</P>
<P><A href="http://student.vfs.com/~m08shashwat/index.htm/demoreels/criminal.avi" target="_blank"> http://student.vfs.com/~m08shashwat/index.htm/demoreels/crim inal.avi</A></P>
<P>shash</P>

[animation devil]

<P>very well done and it expresses his character nicely</P>
<P>dont have any thing to say</P>
<P>keep up dude</P>

[Abhishek]

Looks gr8. Its time we get to see the complete animation SHADY.<br>
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Secondly can u please post a thumbnail image too please ??? I hope itll
feature on Tantra Showcase so ill be needing it for that !<br>
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Thnx !<br>

[andy_maxman]

hi shash,<br>
here i go again&nbsp; <br>
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1. dialogue delivery (voice) to character attitude (acting, body
language) do not suit eachother. i think its the snap-at-pose look
which is causing that.<br>
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2.&nbsp; as the character is standing, shifting weight will add to the performance while delivering the dialogue. <br>
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3.&nbsp; there are places where the mouth action and lip-sync is eased
out (like a moving hold) which i feel isnt required. it makes him look
sloppy.<br>
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4. a more interesting composition would be just great. <br>
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5. the animation on the&nbsp; eyes and eyebrows look intended. maybe cutting down on the movement would help.<br>
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6.&nbsp; the second part of the animation (the dancing aprt) is where
you got the grove going. and again moving the feet a bit here and there
would surely add on.<br>
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hope this helps...cheers!<br>
andy<br>
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btw - is this the dude from 2nd_hand_smokin'_kills?<br>

[Dhaval_jade]

<P><FONT>hi shash</FONT></P>
<P><FONT>this was cooooool animation. i like expressions.</FONT></P>
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[graphixara]

good

[prithvi]

<P>Nice work, man<BR>keep it up!</P>
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[rajesh]

<P>shash,</P>
<P>i didnt see that erlier....why didnt u show it in a'bad??</P>
<P>gr8 work... </P>
<P>keep it up mann.</P>
<P>rajesh</P>

[SHADY]

thanx guys....i am glad to get responces from you.....<br>
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Shash<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"><br>

[DIGITAL_DEMON]

Good work. Keep it up.

[hemendrasinh]

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<P>nice work and i m sure u must be knowing lacking part of animation as u would have passed much time on it then others so try to solve them out. all the best.</P>

[jackal7_a]

good ,nice&nbsp; n neat very clearly presented with the audio feels right <IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">