Animation> Sneak inspired by Carlos Baena

[karanjaura]

Hi Guys,<br>

Here's my trial to make a sneak inspired by an animation clip by Carlos Baena,<br>

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Hope to get ur critics to make my work better.<br>


<a href="http://www.geocities.com/jaurakaran/Generi_Sneak.mov" target="_blank" target="_blank"><br>
CLICK HERE TO DOWNLOAD</a><br>

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Software - Maya<br>

Character - Generi rig<br>

Format - Mov<br>

Codec - Sorenson 3<br>

Filesize - 735 Kb<br>

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Thnx in advance !!

[hells angel]

technically...thats a great piece of animation...very smooth...nice motion....<br>
but his expressions and eyes dont quite transfer his thought..(i saw
this without speakers so didnt check out sound)...and that last sneak
is kinda rigid...theres no head mmovement...and his heads in a very
"non sneaky" position...could use a little more interaction.....<br>
otherwise nice work....all the best:)...<br>
pls introduce urself in the introductions thread:)<br>

[Abhishek]

<P>Hey Nice Work Karan, pretty neat work.</P>
<P>Nicely presented <IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"></P>
<P>Try to make him stay more on the screen when he looks from behind the wall. May give some more time to him to observe the things.</P>
<P>Reduce the time when he gets back behind the wall.</P>
<P>Rest looks really cool. Waitin to c more of your work !!</P>

[moush]

<P><FONT face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size=2>Great work Karan! Jus a few pointers though...i noticed a bit of a head snap aft he enters n then looks down...if you could fix that up...n then yeah reduce the time behind the wall b4 he startz sneakin...! Besidez that i think you have done a great job! <IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">&nbsp;So keep it up!</FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size=2>cheers! </FONT></P>

[canndis]

good work karan&nbsp; , i dont have anything to comment on it ...

[Rawkesh]

A good animation!!!<br>
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Hells Angel is right, after i saw the animation i felt his eyes seem to b a in a world of its own!<br>

[dhruvsm]

<P>good job....please give ur attention to the weight shifts...and the last sneak walk...u can make it more e<FONT face="Times New Roman" size=3>xgregeraite...with more spine bend......</FONT></P>
<P>otherwise nice.........keep it up....</P>

[Vikram]

Quite amazing work.<br>
Truthfully I am in no position to comment however I felt he is quite
huge in relation to the (environment-streetlights pavement etc). Maybe
thats intentional?!! <br>
Though its quite nice.<img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><br>
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[Mayawhiz]

<P><SPAN =bold>hey buddy, i agree totally to what dhruvsm has to say..............</SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN =bold>Its all about exageration................</SPAN></P>
<P><SPAN =bold>Cheers<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"></SPAN><BR></P><!-- Signature -->