Another Evening

[harshdesign]

<P>hi friends...just though of putting a quick environment i did some time back. Did it in 2 days i.e. around 18-20 hours...</P>
<P>Though of putting it here as i'm thinking of including it in my final demoreel..."actually i didn't want to..as thought it's very amateur work...donno"</P>
<P>but then too...was feellig so lame to do changes as the table SUCKS...feed me some feedback as i wanted to make it a backhome junkyard kinda...all comments welcome...<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"></P>
<P>Maya6, Photoshop7</P>
<P><IMG src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v154/harshdesign/3dworkz/environment1.jpg" border="0"></P>
<P>&nbsp;</P><edited><editID>harshdesign</editID><editDate>38398.0098958333</editDate></edited>

[rawskull]

Hey !
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<br />i tried a bit color correction on your image to bring out the mood !
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<br />its a bit dark cause of the jpeg conversion but i feel the env also
<br />need to tell a story !
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<br />your rimlight is too hard and thin ! try fixing it
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<br />probably with this mood if u can try a bit of gi it will look decent
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<br />anyway its a good work ! sorry for taking the leberty to play with
<br />your image
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<br />FIRST ONE&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;: BEFORE
<br />SECOND ONE : AFTER COLOR CORRECTION
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<br />http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v726/rawskull/ENV.jpg
<br />http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v726/rawskull/CC_ENV.jpg
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<br /><img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v726/rawskull/ENV.jpg" border="0"><img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v726/rawskull/CC_ENV.jpg" border="0"><edited><editID>rawskull</editID><editDate>38397.9666666667</editDate></edited>

[dolphin]

<P>i like harsh's version better. </P>
<P>but u could incorporate the glow to the light peeping thru the fence like rawskull showed.</P>
<P>nice work,both of u.....</P>
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[the dOktoR]

<FONT size=2>infact i like the feel on rawskull's edit espcially the leaves the way the color wraps arounf the trees and like FISh said the light passing tru the fence its got a nice feel or shall i say nice mood created for the evening...</FONT>

[rawskull]

Hey Dolphin !
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<br />the image i posted is not "my version" i have just given my
<br />suggestion in the form of an image as i was feeling a bit lazy to write
<br />a detailed comments !
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<br />getting the final feel in the original [ 3D scene ] is more flexibl, or
<br />take the elements as seperate layers and achive more in post.
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<br />if given a choice i will never work on final output on a CG IMAGE +
<br />JEPG !
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<br />hope i have not been misunderstood for having to better the original
<br />image, the [ CC_ENV.jpg ] image is a suggestion only
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<br />raw

[harshdesign]

<P>thanks rawskull for that sweet update..i really liked that glow in between of woodden fence...will try to do that...</P>
<P>thanks dolphin n soulstation for the comments..will try to update it soon..</P>
<P>here's the wire from maya taken realtime print screen...<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"></P>
<P><IMG src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v227/harshdezine/artworkz/another_evening/another_evening_wire01.jpg" border="0"></P>
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<P><IMG src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v227/harshdezine/artworkz/another_evening/another_evening_wire03.jpg" border="0"></P><edited><editID>harshdesign</editID><editDate>38398.147337963</editDate></edited>

[dolphin]

<P>hey harsh, it looks like a nice enuf image to me. u shud definitely work a little more on it, before including it in ur demo reel.<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">&nbsp;</P>
<P>and yes rawskull i know u only touched up the pic a little. and the light glow thing is nice,really adds to the atmosphere.</P>
<P>ok, it just struck me---- the sun is very low on the horizon. so the table and the can should be in the shadow of the fence&nbsp;and therefore not cast such sharp shadows....unless ofcourse they are illuminated by sum other light source....<IMG src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0"></P>