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hells angel
18-01-2005, 12:22 AM
this is my second painting.....guess i've got a little more control with the mouse now......and i'm thoroughly enjoyin painting<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">.....and like i once read.....god made man first so he could do a better job with the female form<img src="smileys/smiley36.gif" border="0">....so here it is....my exotic dancer....lemme know wat u guys think.<br>
photoshop cs and a standard mouse<br>
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<img src="http://www.vivekram.gamingrage.com/dancercgt.jpg" border="0"><br>
the dOktoR
18-01-2005, 12:32 AM
<img src="smileys/smiley29.gif" border="0"><font size="2"> woah dude u amaze me
nice job i mean nice work!!!! is she avaliable??? yea i think she looks
good u don't need to work on her anymore leve her alone... u need help
tell me <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0"><br>
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im impressed...<br>
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<P>heyy buddyyy!!!</P>
<P>excellent job!!!</P>
<P>i find her right had going out of the perspective or angle!!</P>
<P>u have a good anatomy knowledge! goodd shading and she is looking slender!!</P>
<P>i can just say WOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!</P>
<P><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">keep it up!!!!!!!!</P>
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woooooooooooooow
<br /> awasomeeweeeeeeeeeeeeee
<br /> only i think her lips ... dont u think the out line to ehr lips is just to dark compared to tha rest of thetexture of the lips?
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<br />bbut man ....... seriously wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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harshdesign
18-01-2005, 03:37 AM
<P>good work...but few points</P>
<P>1. Perspictive is wrong...as megg already said...right hand...and her belly needs more twist as her legs are almost side view.</P>
<P>2. Hairs..looks good but then too can refine them a bit more...like the shine on the back hairs doesnt looks good enuf.</P>
<P>3. Liked her cloth and lips.</P>
<P>Keep it up...AND MOST IMPORTANTLY...WORK WITH WACOM TABLET...will change ur life <IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0"></P><edited><editID>harshdesign</editID><editDate>38369.6727662037</editDate></edited>
hells angel
18-01-2005, 03:58 AM
thanks soul...no she aint available...<img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0">...and i'm sure i can handle her by myself thanku<img src="smileys/smiley36.gif" border="0"><br>
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thanks megg...:)....i guess all that observation paid off<img src="smileys/smiley18.gif" border="0"><img src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">....about
the perspective...well..i'm postin an image at the end to show why this
could probably be cos i cut the image....cos the perspective looks fine
there.....<br>
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thanks iced...well...about the lips...was workin keepin a lip liner in mind while workin on the make up.....<img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0"><br>
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hey harsh.....thanks dude...well i've already spoken to u online about the crits.....more practise will fix stuff..<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">..and
for the perspective...i'm postin the full image.....and yeah.....i
realllly need a wwacom...doin that hair with the mouse was a realll
pain !!<img src="smileys/smiley5.gif" border="0"><br>
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heres a wip of the image...with the full pose that i later cut
down....didnt finish the hair either cos it was too much for my wrist
to handle<img src="smileys/smiley19.gif" border="0">...anywys.....this should clear most of the doubts on the perspective......<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"><br>
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<img src="http://www.vivekram.gamingrage.com/dancerw.jpg" border="0"><br>
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<edited><editID>hells angel</editID><editDate>38370.5230671296</editDate></edited>
Abhishek
21-01-2005, 02:03 AM
Hey Vivek.. this really rocks dude.. dint know ur so good et paintings too.<br>
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I find it great... just check if u can play wid the bg bit more.i find it really dull.<br>
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Secondly check the way the light falls on her. I mean i find it tough
to make out the point where the light is fallin on her. Some parts are
too bright n some are shadowed on the same side...<br>
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Just have a check... <br>
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<img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><br>
hells angel
02-02-2005, 01:13 AM
hey abhishek...thanks man...i didnt know i was good either<img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0"><br>
anyways....as for bg...yeah....all my bg's suck...need to work on that.....<br>
hmm...lighting...the main source is from the left side......the one on
the right is only a rim light.....accenting form.....hope that answers
ur q.....used a photo ref fo light sources.<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"><br>
<P>hey vivek really nice work!!! she is looking so sexy!!!!<IMG src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0"></P>
<P>BTW, can u suggest me some tutorial(kinda like u did this)?</P>
rawskull
15-02-2005, 04:56 PM
i like the hair ! thats a lot od work ! neat!!
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