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shyamshriram

13-01-2005, 01:48 PM

hi all <IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">  
my first post...photoshop + tablet..critiques are always welcome <IMG src="http://www.cgtantra.com/forum/smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">
<IMG border=0 src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/shyamshriram/honey.jpg" border="0"> <edited><editID>shyamshriram</editID><editDate>38365.0988657407</editDate></edited>

dolphin

13-01-2005, 02:07 PM

first of all, ur work is amazing.......... 
welcome to cgtantra, post sumthing about urself in the introduction thread. 
sumthing which could help improve the painting..........> the
fingers on her hand look a little boxy. it would really look better if
u make them a little rounder and softer. 
amazing work, again. <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">

shyamshriram

13-01-2005, 02:11 PM

Thanx dolphin :) 
yes the fingers are looking boxy 'coz this is in progress, still lots of work to be done <IMG src="smileys/smiley18.gif" border="0">

andy_maxman

13-01-2005, 02:32 PM

some cc for your wip 
she is terrificly gorgeous mate... 
the nose looks waxed... 
her eyes are alive.... 
thought she is a little too plump bust below..... 
nice overall setup..... 
i hope that cursor thing is not part of your final image....did well to offset it though...;-) 
will look out for the updates.....and welcome aboard 
cheers!

hyenaman

13-01-2005, 03:04 PM

niiicceeeeeee.......... 
love the treatment on her hair....specially those little yellow highlights on the inside... 
i agree with andy on the "little plump below the bust"part. 
overall ,dude it still rocks.... 
keep posting..........

dolphin

13-01-2005, 03:40 PM

hey andy and hyena, who said he was paintig a perfect woman??????<img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0"> 
he may be using sum pic as a guide or he may be drawing her from his
imagination. either way she need not be a perfect woman.  although
one of my friends do think she is a little plump below the bust. it's a
matter of individual taste i think, u know " diff points of
view"..........<img src="smileys/smiley36.gif" border="0">

andy_maxman

13-01-2005, 04:14 PM

**post edited ** 
no offence meant dolphin....... 
was just having a rough time at work when i posted that....... 
<img src="smileys/smiley20.gif" border="0"> 
 

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the dOktoR

13-01-2005, 04:24 PM

Very intense... you have a very traditional style.. im
really not a good critiq when it comes to absolute art.. but i like it
very much good show.. <img src="smileys/smiley14.gif" border="0">  

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dolphin

13-01-2005, 04:38 PM

woah, u takin it too personally pal, i was not that serious andy. 
cheers.........<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">

andy_maxman

13-01-2005, 07:07 PM

i owe a beer dolphin........all apologies.......

dolphin

13-01-2005, 07:42 PM

no need for any apology, andy. we all are tantrics after all. 
and about that beer.......... 
well, i owe soulsation a beer and u owe me a beer. so,  give soul
his beer at the meetup in my name. then we will call it even. lol. <img src="smileys/smiley36.gif" border="0">

andy_maxman

13-01-2005, 08:02 PM

ok.. if soul qualifies to get an entry into a pub without his fake birth certicficate......

Crunk

13-01-2005, 08:31 PM

hmm. i see your finally aboard mate...  a fine peice of work youve done.. is this new or the same one you showed me some weeks back... anways lots more work to be done on it.. 
for one thing the jewelery around her neck seems to be connected to her dress due to the exact same shade of strings... 
and her right hands seems a little manly <IMG src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0">... should be more delicate.. 
i hope your comin for the meetup...

shyamshriram

13-01-2005, 08:34 PM

Thanx td. yeah ur right, her hand looking manly, have to work on it, still lots of work to be done, as i mentioned previously, and that jewelery and the dress is also unfinished, nothing is finished yet !
thanx anyways, thanx to everyone for ur support <IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">  will try to come to the meetup !<edited><editID>shyamshriram</editID><editDate>38365.3803125</editDate></edited>

shyamshriram

11-08-2005, 02:55 PM

Yessss I'm still doing this....<IMG src="smileys/smiley9.gif" border="0">  some updates.... now i changed her pose and face lil bit ....
i know im taking too much time for this....will try to finish it as soon as possible.
<IMG src="http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y292/shyamshriram2/shyamshriram-honeynew1.jpg" border="0">
 
<IMG src="http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y292/shyamshriram2/shyamshriram-honeynew2.jpg" border="0">
 
Looking forward for the C & C
Thanx
shyam<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"><edited><editID>shyamshriram</editID><editDate>38575.1852083333</editDate></edited>

firefox

17-08-2005, 02:45 PM

hi 
shyam dude 
she is pretty makes me remember calcutta type godess illustration. 
she is too me not going with the dress.its too forced. 
als check the hand proportion.fingers shud be slender.also the chest below her left breast shud be little inwards. 
 
well its my frank opinion so offence 
 
ur great but like u say drawing is also a painkiller to me. 
 
firefox

shyamshriram

17-08-2005, 09:10 PM

Thanx for the feedback firefox. i always like crits. so feel free for that <IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">
im also not satisfied about the anatomy(im doing this from ages <IMG src="smileys/smiley5.gif" border="0">)...will try my best to finish it as soon as possible, thats for sure !

sunny304

31-10-2005, 09:51 PM

watching ur work simply is becoming my hobby ...
 so i need to do no comment gr8 work absolutely stunning
 <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">
 i made my 50 post in ur forum

vishy123

31-10-2005, 11:08 PM

Am fallin in love with this woman. Shyam u got magic in ur hands.... can u breathe life into her... am not married yet <IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">.. no kidding simply awesome work. wot a talented guy u r <IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"> . I got it on my wallpaper hope u dont mind.<edited><editID>vishy123</editID><editDate>38656.4876157407</editDate></edited>

VishyP

01-11-2005, 12:18 AM

SHYAM THIS IS BRILLIANT<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> ur work is amazing,u r the god,but shyam u could add some more tones to her shoulders,neck and arms, may be im wrong, but this is really very brilliant work keep it up.
 
 
Cheers,
Vishal

vfxmation

18-11-2005, 04:15 PM

Amazing work buddy 
<img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> 
 
I like da colour combimnation that u hv used, its different than da
usual specialy da skin colour..........keep going dude.........<img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0">

3d_devil

12-12-2005, 03:43 PM

<img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0"> i love it it !!! 
 
i hope the last image u posted is still a WIP, coz i can't find much of
the details n attention that u gave to the face n near by areas, when i
look down... 
 
waitin for the updated version....

me&art

04-01-2006, 02:57 PM

g8t job dude ,
ur work is amazing......<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">

ajaytantra

04-01-2006, 03:43 PM

she is gorgeous !! ... she's looking straight into my eyes.... and i have fallen in love with this painting <IMG src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0">.... do give some more attention to the palms... they still look tough... like someone sugsted... make them more slender 
               Keep going shyam...

pixelsmith

04-01-2006, 07:26 PM

hi shyamshriram,
this painting is really great! 
i'm waiting for the finished painting!!
N'<IMG style="CURSOR: pointer" onclick="AddSmileyIcon'smileys/smiley32.gif'" alt=Clap src="http://www.cgtantra.com/forum/smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG style="CURSOR: pointer" onclick="AddSmileyIcon'smileys/smiley32.gif'" alt=Clap src="http://www.cgtantra.com/forum/smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG style="CURSOR: pointer" onclick="AddSmileyIcon'smileys/smiley32.gif'" alt=Clap src="http://www.cgtantra.com/forum/smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">

shyamshriram

04-01-2006, 07:36 PM

<IMG src="smileys/smiley18.gif" border="0">  Extremely sorry for the delay friends...
i really appriciate all the comments...will try my best to finish this ...As soon as possible!
 
Thanx again !
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shyamshriram

13-01-2006, 05:13 PM

Update... <img src="http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6296/honey9vm.jpg" border="0"> <img src="http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/3538/honey16td.jpg" border="0">

pixelsmith

13-01-2006, 07:11 PM

hi shyamshriram,
take care in arm joints and knee's(especialy left knee to toe).
cheers...

me&art

14-01-2006, 02:29 PM

g88888888888888t job man,
<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><edited><editID>me&art</editID><editDate>38731.1280555556</editDate></edited>

shyamshriram

14-01-2006, 09:23 PM

Thanx for the feedback Pixel..i did some corrections.... Update... <img src="http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a108/shyamshriram4/HONEY4CA.jpg" border="0"> Still lots of works left..im trying my best to complete this ASAP C&C are most welcome... Thanx. <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">

abhifx

15-01-2006, 12:40 AM

good going yaar....<img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> 

 

i loved her hairs, face, eyes, gloves, clothes.......... i mean everything is cool shyam<img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0">. 

just wanna ask you that, why did u choose blue color as her skin
tone... i mean its looking nice but naturl will look more cool. its
just me <img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0">. rest all is coming out realy nice. waiting for the finished work. bye tc.

antz

15-01-2006, 01:08 AM

welllllllllll...shayam...u might find it funny...bt i feel as if she is the female avtaar of lord shiva.....the divine look...the color..the calmness on her face....everything so vry symbolic of shiva....regarding the artwrk....its obviously  brillint ..
cheerzz

pratik1213

30-01-2006, 11:36 PM

HEY SHAM!!!  hi Im pratik......and i too am a 2d artist...... I have seen a lot of artists  but havent seen one like u......U compare to SM Pandit and I simply bow before you....ure amazing......the female is an angel........extreemly good composition sense u have got.....Thats all a gods gift....ure a born artist......keep goin.<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">
Pratik
PS: Im new to computer art. I would like to know the techniques u use to paint ure pics. can u gimme any tutorial links and the software u use to paint ure sketches? How do u do it?

pratik1213

30-01-2006, 11:43 PM

Hey sham.......lemme say again ....she makes my heart skip a beat.......shes just gorgeous!!!!

shyamshriram

31-01-2006, 02:36 PM

Thanx again everyone...
Abhifx :: No..i believe Blue is the MOST coolest colour..<IMG src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0"> 
Antz :: I dont think its funny...the most funniest thing is..im doing this painting from more than 1 yr. still in progress..<IMG src="smileys/smiley18.gif" border="0">
pratik :: thanx for ur HUGE compliment...i cant imagine even in my dreams to compare myself with the great painter Mr. S.M. Pandit. anyways..thanx for ur kind words...i have to try hard to digest such HUGE compliment. 
u said u r a newbie in digital art..why dont u post some of ur works <IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">
will give the tut. link after that ;-)
and about the God gift thing...few ppl already told me that..but dont u think u r ignoring my hard work and observervation and other things by saying i m gifted? according to me...EVERONE in the universe is GIFTED by God, all we have to do is...hardwork..to IMPROVE that gift.
Please chk this following link...see how BADLY i had to struggle to make an ANGEL(?) from an EVIL.
actually its started from a ugly sketch in Painter..i had no intention to make this painting this much finished ..(this is my first so called detailed work)
<A href="http://surfunion.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=2219&st=0" target="_blank">http://surfunion.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=2219&st=0</A>
I WISH  I HAD A GOD GIFT. <IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">
Thanx.
will post this in finished section soon(hopefully)
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