the castle land

[drained spirit]

<P>i did a simple matte painting. </P>
<P>Pls give your valuable comments.<IMG src="http://www.photohosting.info/uploads/5fb69a2beb.jpg" border="0"></P>

[rucs4ru]

image nt dere<IMG src="smileys/smiley19.gif" border="0">

[waheednasir]

<P>hi drained spirit...i can see the image and realise it needs a lot more work from u. as in, composition, proportions, lighting and blending everything as a whole. the castle looks as a cut out, make it go with the environment. </P>
<P>clouds are too bright on the left side and are quite distracting. u really have to work with focus. that small cloud piece overlapping that hill is too bright as well.</P>
<P>hope this helps.</P>
<P>just spend some more time on this, im sure itll be improved....:).</P>
<P>all the best.</P>

[drained spirit]

<P>thankyou waheed, i will definitely take your advice and work on it. I love your work and they are very inspiring.</P>
<P>Thanks for your comments.</P>