View Full Version : Lone rider -wip
R.Kamal
25-01-2006, 12:49 AM
<P> inspired bythe western legendary cowboys, movies...it is fun to paint digitally...still on progress.will post soon the updates...stay tuned</P>
<P><IMG src="http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3462/rider5lb.jpg" border="0"></P>
R.Kamal
26-01-2006, 12:01 AM
Any comments!... <edited><editID>kamal_anjelo</editID><editDate>38834.1494212963</editDate></edited>
dhruvsm
29-01-2006, 07:40 PM
hi <span style="font-weight: bold;">kamal</span>.......nice to see ur
work....seen a lots of ur work in a different forum and i'm a big fan
of ur's........it's a nice piece...but there seems to be some
perspective problem..as it is a bit flat and also some awkward
proportions... the horse is looking very small...<br>
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though i don't know much about image compositions and line of
actions....as a layman....my view is, there's a lack of action on the
overall feeling as if u imagine a cowboy on top of a horse with a
gun...he should be banging the image!!!..just my opinion........great
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diablo
24-03-2006, 04:42 AM
kamal dis horse looks 2d but as u say dis is in progress so want 2 see final result
R.Kamal
04-05-2006, 11:01 AM
Thank u <SPAN =bold>dhruvsm...i see the problems now...ill work on them.thanks for the comments.<SPAN =bold>diablo...thanks!</SPAN></SPAN><BR>
moush
04-05-2006, 01:07 PM
<P>Hey agree with the above comments...</P>
<P>The horse's proportions are a bit awkward...and also the perspective is kinda wrong...</P>
<P>The layout can be improved.... </P>
<P>The image overall is looking too flat....</P>
<P>But anyway good try so keep it up! Will be waiting to see an update.</P>
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