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abhifx

29-12-2005, 06:31 PM

hey... how r u all...here is my new work on architectur viz. hope u all like it. i am waiting to hear something about this render from you. i have used 3ds max n Vray.
HAPPY NEW YEAR tantricsssssssssss...........

antz

29-12-2005, 09:24 PM

...........<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">........well done abhi,fr making it to the frnt page.....quite visibly u are improving tremendously...good going yaar....overall lighting has cme real nice.....or haan !!!!  i like the curtains...<IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">.... once more........cheers frm my side...
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shadowcrew

29-12-2005, 10:12 PM

really dashing work dude
 nice lighting
 good going

rdxace

29-12-2005, 10:31 PM

extremely realistic...
awesome...simply awesome!! <IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">

Rawkesh

29-12-2005, 10:41 PM

hey, 
 
nice goin. looks neat. 
 
just dat thr are are a few dark areas.. might want to adjust it slightly. 
 
else is good. 
and hey watchout fot he bedsheet towards the end...it seems as tho its
resting on flat invisible ground. it has suddenly become flat. 
 
try and add a glass near the window, it looks open to outside cant make
out if thrs ne glass. and also use a cover for the clock its lookin odd. 
 
greta improvement. keep at it. 
 
 

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abhifx

29-12-2005, 10:44 PM

hey... 
 
thnx ntaraa, shadowcrew, rdxace........<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">. i m happy that u all liked it. i will try to make my further works as good as i can. 
 
bye n take care. <img src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">

snail

30-12-2005, 12:48 AM

like ur work ....but for some reason i didnt like the veiw from the window.....other than that it looks good

kippu

30-12-2005, 12:58 AM

nice lighting yes .... and yes you do need to add a window but the back ground the sun is coming from the oppposite direction ...hopefully u can rectify that

Inxa

30-12-2005, 02:48 AM

hi, hmm definetely better work. as really mentioned not the right bg, also opposite side light. Get a good bg. the design looks a mixture of old new and all maybe edwardian furniture too <img src="smileys/smiley36.gif" border="0">. overall otherwise its a good development.

abhifx

30-12-2005, 03:34 AM

hey thnx guys for ur comments.... 
yeah i also think that window n BG needs some work.... 
will do it pakka...<img src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">. 
 
thnx again guys.....i am glad that u like it<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">

nilesh shah

30-12-2005, 11:41 AM

Hi Abhifx
  Nice rendering man
  good job<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">

ajaytantra

30-12-2005, 12:43 PM

welldone.... lighting & texturing is really good... even i feel that the image outside the window( the house) doesn't quite blend into the scene..i think its over lit..
   and the bedsheet is awesome...except that why  does the bedsheet bend 90 degrees where it just falls down( the edge i mean)...it just takes a turn ( seems to defy gravity <IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">)
       overall good work man <IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">

Stephen

30-12-2005, 02:33 PM

real nice <IMG height=45 src="smileys/smiley32.gif" width=56 border="0">
good texturing and lighting.
the floor and the wall and the carpets really match well
can you render a view from a persons view looking outside the window laying on the bed.
 
 would make me feel good<IMG height=39 src="smileys/smiley4.gif" width=60 border="0">

abhifx

30-12-2005, 04:25 PM

HI.... 

 

thnx alot nilesh, ajaytantra and stephen. <img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0">. 

 

ajaytantra :- yeah man i am working on that bedsheet stuff and bg only. will post the updated one as soon as i can. 

 

stephen :- its good to see that
u liked it. n hey abut your suggestion... i will definatly try for this
but right now i am g8ing comfortable with interior and lights. but i
will try to do it. 

 

bye n take care

abhifx

30-12-2005, 07:36 PM

hey hi guyssss... 
 
here is an updated pic...... chk this out. 
n feel free to suggest or comment on it.<img src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0"> 
 
<img src="http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y252/abhifx/My%20Work/bedroom_new.jpg" border="0">

pokeye

30-12-2005, 11:45 PM

excellent lighting....
the bedsheet is nicely modeled too!!

snail

31-12-2005, 12:53 AM

i still dont like the bg for some reason.......i cant really point out what about the bg is bothering me but for some reason it is.

Christopher

31-12-2005, 01:29 PM

looks great with all the new adjustments,
but the first bone had a softer feel ,
anyway this looks good too.
 waiting for some more renders
see ya.

3d_devil

31-12-2005, 06:07 PM

it's lookin gr8888 !!!

abhifx

01-01-2006, 10:32 PM

Hey... 
 
thanx a lot guys.... its gr8 that you all liked it. <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">. 
 
sanil :- i also think that , the BG for this image is not that good. but defintly u will find better in my next render. 
 
christopher :- yaa man surely.. will post my new render soon.... do watch it...<img src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">. 
 
3d_devil :- thnx for ur comment man. 
 
bye. HAPPY NEW YEAR guys <img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0">

rdxace

02-01-2006, 04:43 PM

the slightly bleached image BG of the first render was much better... 
imo. you just added some 'unrealism' to your render dude.. not good as compared to the first one.

Dinesh

03-01-2006, 03:45 PM

i really like the carpet 
great work man <IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">

rushali_ks98

03-01-2006, 10:04 PM

I like the texture, looking very good<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">, lighting makin room little dull its my view ha. Otherwise overall is good<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">

abhifx

05-01-2006, 03:31 AM

hey hi... 
 
thnx for your comments rdxace, dinesh, rushali. it's nice that you all liked it.<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">. 
 
rdxace :- i will try to work more harder on BG next time for sure. i am sure you will find it better than this one <img src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">. 
 
take care.

truedreamzz

15-01-2006, 01:17 PM

Hey Abhi... 
 
Nice work!! 
 
I got couple of suggestions for you in the lighting. 
 
1. The most interesting part of the image is bed sheet. You have done excellent job on the bed sheet lighting and texturing. 
 
In reality, if the light source is from outside(window) the foreground
objects will be having silhouette effect unless there is any artificial
light which is lit inside the room. 
 
In order to elevate the bed sheet, you need to give more contrast in
terms of lighting. That means, other areas of scene has to be slightly
darker. 
 
2. Ceiling light - According to the light direction, it can't be so
bright right from the corner. There would be some more shadow area then
the graduated light. 
 
3. Floor - Overall, its slightly bright to distinguish the shadow & light. 
 
4. Mirror - The idea of using mirror is good. It would be seen better if you adjust the lighting. 
 
Check these links to observe real photography for more understadning about the ligthing, how it bounces and all that. 
 

http://www.pbase.com/image/23793312 
http://www.pbase.com/arekarlsen/image/33050215 

http://www.pbase.com/image/31352200 

http://www.pbase.com/image/25319676 

http://www.pbase.com/image/50531808 

http://www.pbase.com/image/33867997 

http://www.pbase.com/image/3485937 

http://www.pbase.com/image/40232295 

http://www.pbase.com/image/16342169 
 
 

Are you working on any of these GI concepts? 
However, wonderful effort from you. Wish to see more and more stuff. 
 
Wish you good luck :) 
 
Yugandhar.