My Website’s Intro Page

[aryan_3dcrazy]

Hi All
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<br />&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I'm 18 yrs old Fresher with no experience. This is Intro page for my Website. Plz comment.
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<br /><img src="http://www.geocities.com/aryan_3dcrazy/Come-here--post.jpg" border="0"><edited><editID>aryan_3dcrazy</editID><editDate>38629.802650463</editDate></edited>

[n2to3]

aamezing idea...good one....lets show us other pages too...and u can give little movment in the tail of baloon..may be i dont know just a suggestion..and give lil animation in flower too...<IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0">

[naveenshukla31]

hey aaryan..thats a nice one.. i liked the style ,color content n the roughness...one thing..the red spot on the character(smthing like shreks donkey) whats that?r u trying to show it as urself....m just guessing ....because uve used red for 'hey come here'..means to follow u..thats i m making out of it.

[hyenaman]

sweeeeeeeeeeetttt....<br>
try and make tha balloon interactive u know like a cant grab with the mouse running around thingy...<br>
kudos<br>

[jollykadoo]

<P>the whole thing is amazing.are u making a flash site? </P>
<P><FONT style=": #c0c0c0">if not then size may pose the problem.as u may be aware of the bandwidth.</FONT></P>
<P><FONT style=": #c0c0c0">i am not sure how u will be presenting the page.but the graphics is really very good.</FONT></P>

[cgBuddy]

<P>wow this is called creativity. i liked ur idea rather i loved it. i believe personal web sites should reflect ur identity n this web page completely do that...</P>
<P>keep going... i m waiting for ur website <IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0"></P>

[aryan_3dcrazy]

Thank u so much. U know what, This kind of crits make me very happy lol. Of course for a fresher like me there is nothing better in the world. The size is not much i guess. And i'm making it in flash. I actually considered making animated baloon but it takes the viewer away from my painting. I mean the core idea becomes secondry. What do u think?
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<br /> The red thing is the glowing eye of the beast.

[phizpuppetry]

Hey...nice concept/style....original and adorable.....u r a true artist at heart...

[abhinab]

U r a creative person.Keep it up.
<br />Abhinab

[eaglecypher]

<P>i agree with abhinab,&nbsp; This is a real creative piece.&nbsp;<IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"> </P>
<P>I hope that this is going to be a flash site..&nbsp; would like to know how the inside pages are going to look..</P>

[aryan_3dcrazy]

thanks a lot everyone <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"> <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0">

[aryan_3dcrazy]

arre yaar i started the website but for some reasons its not working properly. I think i should buy some space instead of a free server.
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<br />Ok this is one more page. Tell me hows the design.......
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<br /><img src="http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c332/aryan_3dcrazy/My-profile.jpg" border="0">

[souparnika]

<P>super!</P>
<P>i liked both</P>
<P><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><IMG src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"></P>

[prats]

<P>Very neat concept akhilesh. I love the colours that u've used, and the sketch forms.</P>
<P>I have one suggestion though....in the pages that follow ur main intro page, it would be nice if you could retain some element from ur main page...like a theme for ur site...there would be continuity and also flow in the design....</P>
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[aryan_3dcrazy]

Thanks Souparnika and Prats
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<br /> Well i totally agree with u prat. Actually when i designed the second page i was not thinking of my website. I was making it as my desktop wallpaper. But later i thought why not put it in my website. So...............
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<br /> I'll i guess i'll have to work on it a bit to put it on the website..... right