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shyamshriram
03-09-2005, 09:44 PM
Just a Character Sketch for my Portfolio...i know, im not good at Anatomy.....looking forward for the feedback from all of u.
Painter 9 + Intuos 3
Thanx
DRAWING is da PAINKILLER !!
sunny304
03-09-2005, 10:09 PM
nice work,
<br />really loking good ,
<br />the char. is great and nice pose but ,
<br />the source of light should be worked out on the cloth and the body. <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">
<br />great job and superb digital painting <img border="0" src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">
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keyframe
04-09-2005, 10:38 PM
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looks very good. But the main problem i see with it is the
weight. I think it would look much better if the feet were over all
shifted to the left. Also think about "contro posto" when u draw a
figure like this. <br>
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refer ------><br>
<img src="http://academic.reed.edu/humanities/110Tech/BodyLanguage/images/largest/doryphoros1.jpg" border="0"><br>
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Also the other thing is the muscle tension. No matter how alert a
person is there are some muscles that are relaxed. In your drawing
everything is tensed and buldging.<br>
thomasphoenix
04-09-2005, 11:35 PM
Well said Keyframe! and excellent reference! Shyam did you do this
direct in the comp?If you do it in paper ,drawing diagonal lines across
the corners and placing the hip would help and then sending a line from
the pit of the neck to the C.O.B center of balance.The drapery needs
work too not falling down very well,verticals need be stronger.And
check out Frank frazetta,he is a master of Heroic poses and dramatic
lighting.<br>
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Having said that! its still a good looking Painting<img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0">,<br>
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mukks
05-09-2005, 11:33 AM
<img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0"><img src="smileys/smiley32.gif" border="0">
shyamshriram
13-09-2005, 03:35 PM
<P>Sorry for the late reply...was bit busy.</P>
<P>THANX to everyone for the valuable feedback. </P>
<P>Keyframe:: thanx buddy...agree with u totally...about balance and that stiff muscle..will keep that in mind, and than for posting such a great ref. :)</P>
<P>Thomasphonix :: Thanx for the feedback...saw Frank frazetta's works...its AMAZING...</P>
<P>Thanx everyone for watching my work and the feedback :)</P><edited><editID>shyamshriram</editID><editDate>38608.2122800926</editDate></edited>
phizpuppetry
14-09-2005, 09:18 PM
Hi Shyam....dude hope u remember me.....had mailed u a long time back...and have been following ur work.....<br>
Nice concept....ppl have already critted this piece to some
extent....lemme do some more.....on a lighter side wud it hurt to make
that langot a lil more masculine....<img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0">....just kiddin.....great artwork as usual....<br>
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Mayawhiz
15-09-2005, 08:47 AM
<P>Hey buddy.....<IMG src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0"></P>
<P>cool art work but i go with what key frame is saying......you need to move the COG a bit forward cause in this be looks a bit off balance..............</P>
<P>But nice work dude........</P>
<P>Cheers.....<IMG src="smileys/smiley2.gif" border="0"></P>
shyamshriram
15-09-2005, 10:55 AM
<P><FONT style=": #c0c0c0">phizpuppertry :: Thanx Dude...i got mails from few ppl...but whats ur good name btw</FONT></P>
<P><FONT style=": #c0c0c0">Mayawhiz :: Thanx for the feedback :)</FONT></P>
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vijay amarnath
27-11-2006, 02:55 AM
how u post u r images<br>
vijayworld@yahoo.com<br>
shyamshriram
27-11-2006, 03:05 AM
<P>Oh noo..WHY ME?? >__< </P>
<P>Mr. Vijay Amaranath...here is the link for u...its on the front page btw....</P>
<P><A href="http://www.cgtantra.com//forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1797&PN=1" target="_self"> http://www.cgtantra.com//forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1797& PN=1</A></P>
<P>i hate to see my old works...especially this one...<IMG src="smileys/smiley18.gif" border="0"></P>
shyamshriram
27-11-2006, 03:07 AM
and PLEASE dont reply here...i will assume that u said "thanx a lot" to me..<IMG src="smileys/smiley18.gif" border="0">
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